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Rewrite an email for another industry

Adapt a cold email that works for one industry so it speaks to another.

The prompt
This cold email works well for {{original_industry}}:

{{email}}

Rewrite it for {{new_industry}}. Rules:
- Change the problem, examples and wording so a reader in {{new_industry}} sees their own situation.
- Keep the structure, length and the closing question style.
- Don't invent results; if the proof doesn't fit the new industry, replace it with [PROOF] for me to fill in.
- Keep {{firstName}} and {{companyName}} as they are.
Example of what it writes
Hi {{firstName}},

Most clinics your size fill the calendar from walk-ins and Google, until a slow month shows how unpredictable that is.

[PROOF]

Is steady new-patient flow on your list this quarter?

How to use this prompt

  1. Copy it into any AI tool, such as ChatGPT or Claude.
  2. Replace each {{field}} with real details about you and the person you're writing to. The more specific they are, the less generic the result.
  3. Check every fact, name and number in what comes back: AI can sound sure about things that aren't true.
  4. Cut it down if it runs long. A cold email reads best under about 75 words.
  5. Send it to yourself and read it on your phone before anyone else sees it.

More ways to use AI well are in AI for cold email: where it helps and where it hurts.

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